Introduction: In this introduction I want talk about pressures that many teenagers faces. I want to talk about where many teenagers get their influences that leads them to so many needs of wanting to be perfect. I want to talk a little about how many teenagers views themselves. I also want give the details of how so many times we spent a lot time worrying about how other people view us because the pressure we get from either our society or the media.
I. In the first paragraph I want to talk about the pressure that is cause by our society. In this paragraph I want mentioned, the pressure that we get from friends, schoolmate, and many others. I will explain how the society has an effect on teenagers.
II. I want to talk about media and how it affects many teenagers these days. Now that there are so many shows on television to watch, I’m sure I will be able to give enough examples on how media has corrupted many teenagers. I want to explain about the beauty that the media portray and how so many teenagers have became so obsess with the beauty that is shown on Television.
III. For the third paragraph I want to talk about how it sad that many teenager look for influences in the wrong places, trying to be perfect, but instead ends up going to the wrong path.
IV. Last paragraph will be my conclusion. I will sum up what I feel about teenagers these days.
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11 years ago
I think you have a great outline for your essay. Your essay will be a very interesting topic to write about, considering there are so many teens out there that strive for perfection. Not only are teens pressured from their friends and media but also some by their parents. Some parents want to live their lives through their children. That may also be another aspect to look at when trying to support your thesis. Great start to a great essay.
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